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Doctor Pepor
Joined: 29 Jan 2008
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 Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:56 am Post subject: Semester 2 Project |
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I am currently a high school student working on my semester 2 project for my architecture class. I would like the feedback of the members here.
I am using Revit 2008 for all the digital design. Last semester we started design by hand. Currently, for what we need to do, it is about 80% done.
Included in this post is the first floor floor plan but not the second as it is unfinished. There is also an elevation view, with lastly a small render.
I am aware of technicalities but I would like a little feedback as the semi-whole thing.
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lekizz
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| Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 2:43 pm Post subject: |
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It all looks a bit unclear at the moment. maybe you need to put things in the different areas of the house (furniture, people, vehicles...) to indicate what is going on. The corridor next to the kitchen seems to be a bit of an afterthought.
Interesting 3D render, there is something compelling about it. The harsh lighting makes me think it is in some sort of desert setting, with high walls to keep out the bandits! You obviously have some interesting ideas about the feel/materiality and it certainly looks different in 3D from the conventional pitched roof house. What is going on on your 'roof'? |
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keyserni
Joined: 13 Sep 2006
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Location: Belfast, United Kingdom
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| Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 7:03 am Post subject: |
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| I take it this is a class in architecture your taking not a full degree in the subject? |
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Doctor Pepor
Joined: 29 Jan 2008
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| Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 7:36 pm Post subject: |
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| I failed to mention I have not added any sort textures or content other than cabinetry on the first floor at the current moment. I have done more lately and It is a bit more complete. Also, the render includes the foundation, it's not ridiculously high walls. I'll go and fix up that bad render, it was done on short time before the bell rang. |
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Mohammed Anas
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| Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 1:12 pm Post subject: |
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hi im Mohammed Anas,im currently in 2nd sem,your planing is good,what is needed is,a little more detail in plan elevation and section,but, rest of all is good.
REGARD,
Mohammed Anas |
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copetedavid
Joined: 06 Nov 2007
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| Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 10:34 pm Post subject: keep it up |
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| the project itself needs improvements, i dont think you need the door and window tags (unless specified by teacher). also room names it may be helpfull to specify the spaces, for high school its alright. if you are looking into architecture as a carer revit is a great tool. keep it up. |
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